This was the first advert idea however on speaking to Hannah she suggested that it might be to complex as there are many areas that the eye has to focus on and that may prove to complex for the reader, she also suggested that the bottom where it was suppose to give info about the program and channel was complex and that " it is hard to read and make out " and so i will to my best to improve t eh over all appearance of it.

> After asking someone about it they said " there are too many places to look" and that it's to confusing for them because they have to be looking all over the place.