I finished the draft of the double page spread and i got some feed back aas to what to improve from what i heard. > change the background image > change layout >Change from mini stories to talk about the full documentary and try to keep try to find a better title.










In the News paper advert i have to link the visual to what is being advertised because when i asked people about what they thought they told me that they was not sure what product it was trying to promote.
However they said that they liked the simple background and the colours of the Logo so that might be something to keep in mind when designing in future.