This was the first advert idea however on speaking to Hannah she suggested that it might be to complex as there are many areas that the eye has to focus on and that may prove to complex for the reader, she also suggested that the bottom where it was suppose to give info about the program and channel was complex and that " it is hard to read and make out " and so i will to my best to improve t eh over all appearance of it.

> After asking someone about it they said " there are too many places to look" and that it's to confusing for them because they have to be looking all over the place.

So after doing bref research i found out that for an advert to be good it must have
- Simple and emotive text
-Emotive colours
-The image should go with the topic and back up the product being advertised
and so on..

Quick update

i was given the task of searching for effective background music for our documentary production so i was thinking considering that our production is based on comics then i should search for rock music non copyright to mention and i don't think that tracks such as dance or upbeat music will work but i will search around on he internet until i find one

we also have filming tomorrow so hopefully it all turns out OK and the cameras don't pick up as much noise as they did before

More editing

Today i started editing the interview half of the production and what do you know the computers are slow not to mention the fact that it takes forever to save and it does not add the effect to the clip. mmmm so my teacher told me to save the clip then restart the computer so i started to do that when  the computer says NO! oh well lets hope that it wont do that again

Newspaper advert

So i was having a look at Newspaper adverts and other adverts to check the conventions and this is what i found

. they all seem to have the subject in full view
. simple yet informative text
. the sometimes use words like we, everyone, us to create a group mentality
.seem to have emotive colours example yellows , or reds
. large eye catching text to catch the readers attention
.and the most simple thing of all is that when people faces are in the advert they always appear to be smiling i found out that this was to create an emotional response with the readers so hopefully in our newspaper advert we follow some of these conventions
( i know the music i create is not the best )

iNterview

Yesterday we went filming at the comic book shop where we had to do an interview with the owner of the comic book shop or worker of the comic book shop well one of them, and it was ok we got most of the shots we wanted however im starting to think that the volume was to loud.




we started by taking the LOG ( London over ground ) to Kenton where we go off and caught the bus which took forever by the way



Kenton station on the Bakerloo line












As you can see when were arrived it was not that dark but it was getting there



















finally picture of us in action however i turned the camera to focus and moved my hand rather then keep it to( infinite) where the photo's are taken instantly

editing today

today we started editing for the first time which was good and so far what we have is really good m e thinks
we also have filming today at the comic book shop at 15:30 and lets see how it goes, we are returning back to the comic book shop to carry out the rest of the interview



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